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07.14.2008
Landscape with Little Figures
Landscape with Little Figures
There were some pines, a canal, a piece of sky.
The pines are the houses now of the very poor,
Huddled together, in a blue, ragged wind.
Children go whistling their dogs, down by the mudflats,
Once the canal. There's a red ball lost in the weeds.
It's winter, it's after supper, it's goodbye.
O goodbye to the houses, the children, the little red ball,
And the piece of sky that will go on falling for days.
Donald Justice
MSN的暱稱,
之前在畫阿金的時候也又提過這首詩...
感謝在大學最後一次的時候上到了TOM的現代詩
我本來就很喜歡詩的,雖然我對於iambic pentameter還是相當苦手(笑)
喜歡詩是因為詩無論如何都比大部分的fiction短的多了XD
因此在用字選詞上面必須要更小心細膩,同時在短短的句子當中表現出情感雨情境
這是他有趣而珍貴的原因...我是這麼認為的。
.然後....
小小的高興一下XD
隻前去看成績的時候發現了這次現代詩Tom居然給我92分@@
好驚訝!!!!別說是Tom平常的給分標準了(<--shakespeare我只有70幾)
就連在英文系的課也不見得能拿到90啊orz....
是上次的短詩寫的太好了嗎!!??(笑)
還是我終於在期末考或是paper出運了啊XD(<--沒有期中考)
還是....
因為要畢業了所以得到bonus point?(笑)
這個可能性最高吧XD
anyway
It's not winter, it's not after supper,
but still it's goodbye.
goodbye to eveyone i met in these four years,
and goodbye to the sky which we once saw together.
the scenes, the sky we saw in nccu will never fall in our minds.
Right?
There were some pines, a canal, a piece of sky.
The pines are the houses now of the very poor,
Huddled together, in a blue, ragged wind.
Children go whistling their dogs, down by the mudflats,
Once the canal. There's a red ball lost in the weeds.
It's winter, it's after supper, it's goodbye.
O goodbye to the houses, the children, the little red ball,
And the piece of sky that will go on falling for days.
Donald Justice
MSN的暱稱,
之前在畫阿金的時候也又提過這首詩...
感謝在大學最後一次的時候上到了TOM的現代詩
我本來就很喜歡詩的,雖然我對於iambic pentameter還是相當苦手(笑)
喜歡詩是因為詩無論如何都比大部分的fiction短的多了XD
因此在用字選詞上面必須要更小心細膩,同時在短短的句子當中表現出情感雨情境
這是他有趣而珍貴的原因...我是這麼認為的。
.然後....
小小的高興一下XD
隻前去看成績的時候發現了這次現代詩Tom居然給我92分@@
好驚訝!!!!別說是Tom平常的給分標準了(<--shakespeare我只有70幾)
就連在英文系的課也不見得能拿到90啊orz....
是上次的短詩寫的太好了嗎!!??(笑)
還是我終於在期末考或是paper出運了啊XD(<--沒有期中考)
還是....
因為要畢業了所以得到bonus point?(笑)
這個可能性最高吧XD
anyway
It's not winter, it's not after supper,
but still it's goodbye.
goodbye to eveyone i met in these four years,
and goodbye to the sky which we once saw together.
the scenes, the sky we saw in nccu will never fall in our minds.
Right?
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